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let me know your thoughts? I'm jealous of your room too!! There is also a collection of photographs Ive taken in both Australia and New Zealand which is great because this ties together my two main cultures, these photos are surrendering my window and hanging above my desk. In total I have 9 hats that make my room stand out and the brands on many are monster energy, Billabong e.t.c. You could be mistaken for being in a movie theater. Not too big that it's not cozy, and not too small it's cramped. The carpet a deep chocolate brown to complement a pure white set of draws. The walls of my room are brown and the door is white the a gray handle. Is your bedroom like mine dirty and smelly. My room is square shaped with a big floor to ceiling window (which is awesome because I can see the mountain I love to ski on so much) on the back wall with draping curtains. The colours in my room are quite dark. Then the colour of the furniture from a blue to a lighter colour. It is the largest bedroom in the house it is rectangular and has a built in wardrobe. When I look walk inside my bedroom and look out the window I see the big pine trees blowing swiftly in the wind and the bed just waiting to be made since yesterday. Like I mentioned before, my windows take up quite a lot of space, meaning that I don't have very much room for any other decorations. When you say your home is a swamp, you usually mean that its messy, dark, and maybe even a little smelly. Your vocab was well done and I was able to visualize. My bed layout is in the corner of the room with a bit of space in the middle of the room. Under both of those beds there are fold out trundlers made for if i want more people in my room so in total i can have a staggering four people in my room! Its normally just a mucked up pile of sheets and she is always nagging me to make my bed and or clean my room. It has a dark deep blue background with the flowers painted in a yellow so light it is almost white, the brush strokes carefully placed to show the wind gently blowing the flowers. They are also a good way to annoy everyone in the house and wake them up when I want to. Creamy brown and soft those are just few words I would use to describe my carpet it is great for my hard feet. metaphors to describe a bedroom the root operation that is defined as correcting a portion of The first and the best part about my room is the layout. Personally I love my bedroom. People drive around the neighborhoods to see the beautiful houses lit up. I have a double bed,white covers and matching pillows to my starry bed which is navy blue and white spots sprinkled all over It. MY BEDROOM NSL: There were some comma's needed that were not there, and some starts of sentences that were not capitals. What storms then shook the ocean of my sleep. Personally would like a orange feature wall in my bedroom but when you're renting a house you have to have permission to do so. I personally love my bedroom. As an Amazon Associate I Earn from Qualifying Purchases. The movie is about a family trying to save their home (their castle) from developers who are trying to forcibly take it off them. The biggest most horrifically untidy thing about my room is the floor. You have done well to describe your room. I'm impressed with your vocabulary and spelling. William I liked your descriptive words and the structure of your paragraphs. I would give you a 3. In my room sometimes you can hear quite a lot of things but mostly its my siblings or music. When I look out the window I also see the mountains and some time you can see car lights on the side of the mountain when it is dark. I love my room because you can just sit and read and just play. I have a black bed side table that is woodin and I have a plastic clock, then I have a grey alarm clock that I really dislike because it wakes me up and I don't like getting up. The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. I think Bridget's description of her room is fairly accurate. You described your bedroom very well, but I feel your punctuation let you down a bit. I will be telling you about how my bedroom is mine and what it looks like, and also the good and bad stuff about it. Its small and cluttered, so there's no where to move. NSL: be more bold with good words to catch the readers attention and to take them on a journey. Your writing is very descriptive. If I could change anything about my bedroom I would start with a new duvet because of the bright mixed colours. Yes it definately is the best bedroom in the house and yes we are all jealous!!!! My tv is sitting in the corner of the room but is easy to see because of the size, it is 39 inches and cool looking. Just remember we are moving your room soon. it is very interesting and the punctuation is really good but you stroll into your room hop in your bed and then stroll into your room again so it sought of jumped around. An excellent description of your room Meg. But at one point you said in your accessories paragraph "But they aren't dirty they are actually quite clean all thanks to my dog." How my bedroom looks? My bedroom looks, smells and feels great. If were tired, then R.I.P floor, your burial is in progress. I love my room and no one's going to get rid of that! Lv 7. A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna used is, " The bedroom is so messy, it looks like a war zone. The wardrobe is the oldest piece of furniture in my room it was there when the house was built which was a long time ago. My wardrobe is a double sliding door with a grey color. I am lucky as the sunlight peeks over the fence and smothers my walls with a bright, warm glow. A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna since the air conditioner broke." My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. My bedroom is down the small hallway and to the right. And I have dirty plates on my floor because when I get home from school I will get something to eat then go lay on my bed, then I forget to take them out of my room. Because its too big to get out the door and it sits almost in front of my door and we cant get it out and I hate it. However your vocabulary could still improve to help the readers to have a clearer picture of what your bedroom looks like. This page contains 100 metaphor examples. My bedroom A normal room for a 13 year old. In my bedroom I have a big abstract photo of mountains hanging above my head. My bedroom is the room straight ahead of the hallway it has the great things that most bedrooms have a theme, colors, bed and a carpet and those are the four topics I will tell you about. He is a pig. I opened the door, it creaked and made a sound like someone's fingers on a chalk board. My room feels very charismatic and lively, as though a lot is happening in a single space. Its a room I am proud to call my own. My room is a square room and is medium sized, I am lucky enough that I have it all to myself. I like to walk around barefoot because the carpet tickles my feet and sinks into my toes. It might not be your typical 13 year old bedroom because it's a spare room. The walls have a paint swirl on it that comes off the wall about 5 cm and it looks awesome! Penultimate par5agraph the full stop at the end goes inside of the brackets. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. There is clothes such as shirts and shorts mixed in with stuffed toys and shoes. When I walk into my bedroom, it instantly feels as though I am in my own, private space. When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. I like my room because it is my own space. In my room the cleanliness is not so good. Another thing I liked is the spelling is very accurate and you described your bedroom well. Some of the punctuation was a little muddled some of the I's were not where they needed to be and in between the full stops and the next sentence there were no spaces. If you said your home was a warzone, you might think it wasnt a particularly nice place to be. 7. as broad as Heavens expanse. There isnt tonnes of furniture in my bedroom but I make it work with the room I have, I had the idea of a cabin bed so that i can fit some stuff under it rather than having it crammed up somewhere else. Earrings, jewelry, crafts and a whole bunch of other stuff piled on top of the dresser. One window is high on the wall with a rectangular shape the other window is more centered on the wall and is a square. I suck creamy cock. The bedroom is a place of solitude, a place to just relax, I spend most of my time either sleeping or reading and the rest of the time is for cleaning, it's not the fanciest but it's mine. I use my bedroom to sleep, relax and sometimes do my homework. The size is a king single. I have massive two windows that take up almost all of the wall. Finally is my headset it is a turtlebeach recon 60P with a black base and a cool funky design on the base. Even though it's small and crammed together and not that tidy it all adds to the style and the feel of the room. now I will tell you about the hard wood of my dutchess, my duchess is dark wood it has lots of junk on top of it such as my watch some books a photo that's framed and a lot more. Feedback - Overall I quite liked your writing and it's not to detailed but it has some in there and the description you used was great. I dont really have any toys, My room has a lot of matching colors because my room is a modern color. Annies Bedroom My bed is in the corner of my room because there is no other space for it to go. The accessories. -3, Brody, I like your writing. Your spelling was mostly correct there were just a few words like duvet. Time for the most exciting part of it, the bed. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. At the foot of my bed there is a built in wardrobe with lots of clothes and at the foot of my sisters bed theres the entrance to the room and the door to the en suite. The reason why my room is my room is because the wallpaper, the wallpaper is nicely placed in cool spots. Well done though :-). My wardrobe is unbelievably messy because theres so much stuff I have to fit in it, because my room is small compared to all the other rooms. It's Romeo's line about his inamorata: "Juliet is the sun." The first thing about the layout in my room you notice is the large curtains covering the windows at the back and at the left of my room. But your NSL would be to use a larger range of different words as you have repeated some of the good words. My light shade is a bright red with white flowers scattered over it. Next to that is a deceptive worktop. I love my room with all of these mashed up colours. I get a feeling you're into sports and really like cosy spaces. [4] Smell origins may take the form of a noun (the smell of leather) or an adjective (a leathery smell). I believe this because my bright orange feature wall attracts the daylight sun and all of the furniture is either new or has had a splash of paint to make it look fresh. The detective listened to her tales with a wooden face. All I can hear is my brothers music playing really loud and the sound of my dad telling me to clean my room. My room has lots of colour in it. It is the most modern part of my entire house because it has recently been renovated from the garage that was never used. It has three drawers with coloured red, yellow and green and they hold some of my clothes. Harriets Bedroom The Mess, it's the first thing you see when you walk in, it's everywhere you pretty much have to swim through it all just to get to my bed because it's all covered in clothes that I've worn for the past week and can't be bothered walking the 20 meters to put them in the wash. My mum yells at me all the time to give it a clean but I just about always manage to find an excuse to not clean it up. 3 of my walls are a plain white but the fourth one has wallpaper on it, the wall paper has a cream coloured background and has light pink coloured pineapples. No one can get in except for me. In the middle of my room up against the feature wall is my bed, its a Queen Double, with white outlines of hexagons and a grey background for my duvet and pillows. The very bottom layer is a soft grey cover, the second one is the same colour then the 3rd layer is a soft bright red colour this is mostly for warmth through the winter the top layer has blue red white stripes on it and is big and fluffy my pillows also match this color. you could add some more descriptive words, Angus your punctuation was good but your spelling had a couple of 'i's in stead of a I. 10 metaphors to describe a place. I really enjoy your description jake I can visualize your bedroom very well. I wouldn't change anything about it even if I had the choice. It smells like fresh vanilla because of the bowl of dried petals and shells that have been smothered with air freshener. But the floor is not the messy thing in my room my wardrobe is, my wardrobe is where all the dirty clothes are that I can't be bothered to put away, when I have to tidy my room so I just put them in my wardrobe. She could have added the fact that we live in a Lockwood home which is why the walls are made of wooden planks. The story behind this is that ogres are usually thought of as being dirty, smelly, and unkept. Were most comfortable there, which is why we have the idiom: I feel right at home. My room to me is the most warmest place in house which makes my room cozy and casual. The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. My rooms walls are two different colours. I have lots of little nips and nobs that I use to make my room more interesting. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. This is the end of my description but in the future I would like to either add some more stuff in there which I have been dying to have for ages or have it in a different room. Below the small window on the left is a nice, lush white desk with a lot of my belongings lying on top. But on the drawer top is a bit of mess, it holds my phone, a book, ipod and my lamp and behind my bed on my wall I have some posters. The coziest of It, I'll admit my room is the coziest in the house.and that's how I like, warm covers,warm mattress and my relaxing spot. I can also take out anger when I am annoyed and I needed my drums to practice for my drum lessons. You used a lot of good descriptive words to express your bedroom. Your description is really good. The colours in my room are all colours I love and are comfortable in and around. The trees blowing in the evening breeze shake leaves slowly onto the lake, delicately touching the water. I would say that the smell of my bedroom is like a warm summers day and it looks like a warm summers day too. In my room I also have a painting the my Aunty drew for me, It is a huge field of wheat with huts in them but no people from what you can see. My theme, my theme of my room is based on a sporty kind of theme. The laws don't apply to my imagination except for the time to clean your room law. If you open the window the fresh air wafts in. Good work. So, you can use this metaphor! the room was smelly like dirty socks. The spelling was very good I struggled to find any mistakes. But I would like to get rid of the hole and change the wallpaper, also I want a tv. Good description of your bedroom (mess and all). Most times all you can hear is the clicking of my keyboard on either my ipod or laptop. I LOVE THE DETAILED DESCRIPTION OF THE THINGS YOU CAN SEE OUT YOUR WINDOW. If you go into My room you will probably think it's really big and very messy, and the first thing you will see is the pink wallpaper and the rips and sellotape on the walls. You might use this metaphor if your brother and sister just argued all day long. The only errors I could see was that you wrote picture instead of pictures. The chook shed is made out of corrugated iron. Sometimes my siblings come into my room but they dont stay for long because they are too noisy so they get kicked out. My favorite thing in my bedroom is my drums they are blue and black but look purple in the light. 5, Can you use tactical language only to describe your bed. Then where you enter my bedroom behind the door there is my Hockey gear, Swimming bag and my School bag. But the spelling and use of punctuation was needed and also you could use some more descriptive words. As you walk into my room you may notice the bright colours. They might also have filing cabinets and stacks of work-related folders lying around. Third, the accessories, a lot of the accessories are gaming related like Pokemon and Call of Duty and theres my lighting module. I am proud of this layout, despite the occasional spots of untidiness. This seems to be a fair reflection of your bedroom. Also some of you words are slept wrong or used in the wrong context. It feels like an environment that I like to be in. Descriptive writing is one of the essential skills that children will learn in school and progress into life. Then the bedside table is nearly crammed in the top left hand corner. Around my room are a lot of decorations like skateboards, medals and paintings. The layout of my bedroom has my bed in the middle and then there is a gap between my brown clothes draw and my bed. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! However, if you cautiously open the drawer, it looks as if a bomb has exploded inside. The adjectives summarise the tranquil space really well. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. I like her use of descriptive words and the slight humour. Overall well done. Looking around my room, I notice the layout, it is a large square shaped room with enough room to do a cartwheel in. So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. It is also nice to curl up with a book or bask in the afternoon sun. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. Straight ahead there are windows facing east. No one's room is black and white they all have colours and mine has definitely got a lot of colours. And now the style of my bedroom and what I love about it. Furniture is one of the biggest features of the room. My room is the smallest in the house but I love my room just the way it is. Next to that there is 2 shelfs about 1 meter long one is 30 centimeters higher than the other the bottom one is black and the top one is white and on top is legos that I built when I was young. My room is VERY messy. Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. I also share the cupboard with my sister, meaning that I have the right side of the cupboard for my items. 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